Posted by SB on November 17, 2011 at 10:24:09:
In Reply to: Ta da - winner of the 2011 Bulwer-Lytton bad fiction contest posted by Les99 on November 16, 2011 at 13:48:42:
That's not bad writing, that's good writing. Now here is bad writing.
The executioner sneered as the young queen ascended the stairs to the guillotine; in the old days, he thought, at least there was some buildup, a little time on the rack or some disemboweling, but nowadays everyone wants instant gratification.
: Ta da the winners of the 2011 Bulwer-Lytton bad fiction content are at:
: http://www.bulwer-lytton.com/2011.htm
: Here is the top prize winning story:
: Cheryl’s mind turned like the vanes of a wind-powered turbine, chopping her sparrow-like thoughts into bloody pieces that fell onto a growing pile of forgotten memories.
: Sue Fondrie
: Oshkosh, WI